la-yinn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Zeptonix - Proxima-Omega]

I feel like the mixing is alright, but the melody line on the drop is cluttered. Sometimes less is more and more is less. Everything comes to its own a bit better around the 2:30 mark, but I still feel like you should replace some of the end of the bars with something like a string assortment to better fill out the track. As it stands, it doesn't suck you in because the melodic parts want to be the dominating factor and I almost feel like when the second drop hits you should let the driving bass have more of an impact; but it can't because the frequency range is already filled up with 100's of synth hits flying around. Let synths carry the melodic tones and let the bass drive the track forward. Don't try to make both of them do both, because it detracts from the composition. The intro could do with low humming reece or something to better lead up to the drop.

Either way, it's definitely not bad and has its own character.

DjCocsOFFICAL responds:

Wow thanks for such a big review :o

Will focus on mixing more

[Neurohop]

I'd say your bass could use a sharper high end but it's pretty slick as is mate, vibing out atm!

Qshunt responds:

Thanks mate :) much appreciated :)

[Celestial Flare (Preview)]

Wow, been forever since I've heard anything from you. Long time no see 'round these parts!

Sexy track, very sexy bass sounds. Liking how you guys went for a more mellow variation of liquid; airy hats and no sharp instruments. Makes it a real smooth piece. :)

Jenni-Harry4eva3 responds:

Eyyyy dude! Yeah, I've been going and come 'round every now and again, haha! Glad you like :)

J.P.

[Jack's Revenge]

Duuuuuuuuuuude

yooooooooooooo

like

woaaaaaaaaaaa

no but

dude

like

woa

u know?

(Sexy mixing bro.)

Lashmush responds:

A sexy song from a sexy mind.

[Mischief]

huntin wabbits and doing dwugs

Lashmush responds:

DWUGS FOW EWEWYWUN!

[Lunar Mind (Instrumental)]

(Q> _<)--\m/

*headbangbangbang*

Lashmush responds:

Dankje.

[Chained Together]

who's behind me what's it doing there and where did my face go

Quarl responds:

They took my face :C

[Krushendo (K. Rool III)]

inb4 this gets frontpaged on the day you release MI

Lashmush responds:

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[One Trick Pony]

I can't help but think "this is whack" and yet feel "this is dope"

how you do this

Oh and that break is proper funky...

Quarl responds:

muchos gracias

[Electroboy]

we want moar

Solid track mate, I would've liked to hear some fuller ambience in the intro though, 0:30 - 1:00 especially

and I personally wouldve distorted the #fuck out of that high pitched synth layered on the guitar cause it's a little weak-sounding, but I think that may be cause the sound of that guitar is pretty fucking beast

2:05 - 2:25 I think that's a pretty cool transition / piece. The mix of heavy guitars and acidy synths sounds like something zircon would do, it sounds neat

tens and fives and brofists

Lashmush responds:

thanks, bro. i went for a more simple mainstream sound in this one. there will be more industrial stuff coming i think. c: