la-yinn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

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March!

I like the drums in this track. They fit into an 'imperial march' sort of theme. I'm guessing you wanted to make something like that, and you've succeeded.

It's very repetitive though, and it doesn't loop perfectly (last few notes are cut off.)

Composition: 7/10
Overall quality: 8.5/10

8/10
4/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

Uni-bombeR responds:

yah thats what I wanted.

Thanks man.

[Adrenaline FX]

Great stuff

It's so energetic, it's DnB to it's fullest - I love it. Keep it up, and hope to hear some more of your work soon!

I've added you to my favorite artists, to see how you'll do with better programs. Don't mess it up. :P Better programs often mean more work and learning to be done.

Overall quality: 9
Composition: 10

10/10
5/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

axeFX responds:

EEK! too much preasure :P

[PSM Danger, Danger!]

*nods*

Short, but pretty powerful beat and it loops perfectly. Nice! Although it sounded like a lot of the same in my ears. Maybe the starting beat's a bit *to* powerful?

Composition 7/10
Overall Quality 8/10

7/10
3/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

masterkl16 responds:

True, true. I agree that I could've toned down all the "ONOES" just a bit once the other instr.'s came in.

Thanks.

[Wild Portrait (A Journey)]

Safe.

So you've made this in 5 hours and 3 cigs? Touché. It sounds reaaaaally nice. I'm sure you'll be a succesful artist if you keep this up, cause I don't have anything to point out to you. Well, except the end. It's so sudden! Should've let it fade away, or add another solo-pattern with an abrupt ending. No dragging the beat and then halting it, cause that sounds a bit off. ;)

Composition 8/10
Overal Quality 9/10

9/10
4/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

thatguy669606 responds:

Hey La-Yinn, thanks for the review. I totally agree with you about the end. I wanted to add an awesome piano part after the breakdown at the end, but my FL got all laggy, as I've told 3ndL3ss and Krussi, and it made it really hard to continue on with the song. Literally, the last hour of work I put into this was I had to leave out because of how bad it got. Oh well though. Appreciate the review though. I'll make sure the next one I make doesn't just drop out.

[Anal Pewbs]

Aweful.

I seriously don't know how you could've made that and thought 'yeah, ok. I'ma upload!'. It lacks *any* form of variation from its already below-average pattern. It's just ONE pattern which repeats about 20 times, all extremely loud, with a bit of change in the height of the tunes.

I'm not sure weather you think this is good, or you're just a Spam Submitter, since you've only uploaded 3 songs. If you want to create a nice, catchy song, you have to use multiple instruments, use synths, synchronizers, mix it up, use an amp! Maybe it's a little complex to understand, but at least 'keep it real' by adding multiple patterns!

1/10
0/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

Pasty-Flawss responds:

Oh,,, You must know everything about music considering your submission count and all...

[[T] Awesome Guitar Tune]

Nice!

Sounds very nice mate. Loved the build up and the general layout, the sound itself was very clear, and the background melody fits perfectly. Although the guitar solo could use a bit of fine tuning. Bit more variation in the sound.

8/10
4/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

tomashcu responds:

THANKS MAN!!! you are sort of my god now THANKS hope u enjoyed it
yeah i like it when it get to bout 40 secs
-Tomashcu- DJ POWER (OSG)

[Dystopia - Cyberpunk Messiah]

Indeed.

The song matches your own comments about it. It sounds pretty dark, and grim - but there's a touch of hope. I think you did a good job on doing that. Gives some life to the track. ;)

8/10
4/5

~La_Yinn, --'

popraz responds:

Thank you !

[the evil king bowser]

Awesome you say..

Imo that's overexagerating. It's not thát good. The organ gives it somewhat the feeling of a '70 horror movie. Although I have to agree the flamenco guitar sounds perfect.

7/10
3/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

stroshi responds:

Awesome is what i think. you have your own opinion, and that's fine. I make it to where i like it. besides, it's not like I'm trying to make it sound cheesy.

[Fade Out]

It's ok.

Yeah, the beat's ok, but nothing really special. It's not something I'd personally listen to. :p

6/10
3/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

svinepels responds:

OK. Thanks for the feedback. I've made some other stuff that you might want to listen to.

[4 AM]

>_>

The singing is, indeed, quite out of tune. The beat itself isn't one of the best I've heard. Infact it matches a mediocre beat. Maybe I'm an ass, maybe I'm over criticizing, but I don't think this is a good song, even though I admire people putting vocals into their songs. I KNOW you can do way better, so cmon, DO better!

HyruleanHyroe responds:

You are most definitely not being an ass, your review is one of the VERY few intelligent and encouraging reviews we've received since making #3. Just one thing, I guess I don't know what you mean by 'it matches a mediocre beat.' Did you have a specific beat in mind?

Anywho, thank you for the positive criticism and the bolstering words, and rest assured that we're improving with every song we write.

Skank or die.