la-yinn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[4 AM]

>_>

The singing is, indeed, quite out of tune. The beat itself isn't one of the best I've heard. Infact it matches a mediocre beat. Maybe I'm an ass, maybe I'm over criticizing, but I don't think this is a good song, even though I admire people putting vocals into their songs. I KNOW you can do way better, so cmon, DO better!

HyruleanHyroe responds:

You are most definitely not being an ass, your review is one of the VERY few intelligent and encouraging reviews we've received since making #3. Just one thing, I guess I don't know what you mean by 'it matches a mediocre beat.' Did you have a specific beat in mind?

Anywho, thank you for the positive criticism and the bolstering words, and rest assured that we're improving with every song we write.

Skank or die.

[~EnV~Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix)]

Catchey!

Has a very nice variety in instruments, and you've managed to optimize the use of every one. Although I'm not a great fan of this kind of music itself, I think this one sounds rather nice. At some points, it was a bit repetitive, such as the end. I would've loved to heard the piano go on til the end, but still - great song!

[Guitar Play Remixed]

Yes.

You got a good rythm right there! Nice mix, although I think the mid is a bit to calm. Kind of creates 'space' between the pieces of the main loop. Still, good song.

TheSwitch responds:

You have to rest sometimes too! :)

[Rig & Spawn - 16 Bar Assassin]

Yessss

Great song! Not to fond of rap/ hip-hop, but I really encourage people to add a vocal aspect to their songs when they put them up on Newgrounds. It adds a whole new dimension to the song, and it worked out perfectly in this song. Respect, mate.

Rig responds:

Thanks, man. It was a fun piece. :)

[==(Deep Blue Clouds)==]

Soothing effect.

Very calming. You made my headache disappear, thanks. ;)

Favorited.

[ParagonX9 - Chaoz Survivor]

Simply, sick!

If there's an end to how many notes can fit into a second, then this song has surely reached it. The thing about you though, is that those notes all fit together and together make an awesome track.

So, as you would say..

"YESZ, MOAR!!"

[B0UNC3 - The Final Fantasy]

Very nice beat, but a bit rushed.

Sounds great! By rushed, I mean that you 'created' the beat to fast. It's done halfway, and just repeats after that. That's to bad, really. Well done anyway

[Final Fantasy VII - Prelude]

No.

Doesn't make it. This isn't the song I'm attached to, the piano sucks indeed, as stated before. Maybe you could've used a different instrument, or maybe mix it up a little to create something refreshing. This song is VERY repetitive as it stands right now, and frankly, quite irritating.

Keli1989 responds:

Yea i was thinking of using the notes i already have and change it into something less piercing. Maybe use a guitar but add low bass notes under, i think that might be able to save it.

[Mystic Quest Battle Song]

Chill. :f

It's a lot more relaxing than the first one. You've added a new dimension to the song, and I like it. Although in my own opinion, I'd rather have the original whilst playing the game. This is a nice tune, but it doesn't fit with battles.