la-yinn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[PSM Danger, Danger!]

*nods*

Short, but pretty powerful beat and it loops perfectly. Nice! Although it sounded like a lot of the same in my ears. Maybe the starting beat's a bit *to* powerful?

Composition 7/10
Overall Quality 8/10

7/10
3/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

masterkl16 responds:

True, true. I agree that I could've toned down all the "ONOES" just a bit once the other instr.'s came in.

Thanks.

[Wild Portrait (A Journey)]

Safe.

So you've made this in 5 hours and 3 cigs? Touché. It sounds reaaaaally nice. I'm sure you'll be a succesful artist if you keep this up, cause I don't have anything to point out to you. Well, except the end. It's so sudden! Should've let it fade away, or add another solo-pattern with an abrupt ending. No dragging the beat and then halting it, cause that sounds a bit off. ;)

Composition 8/10
Overal Quality 9/10

9/10
4/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

thatguy669606 responds:

Hey La-Yinn, thanks for the review. I totally agree with you about the end. I wanted to add an awesome piano part after the breakdown at the end, but my FL got all laggy, as I've told 3ndL3ss and Krussi, and it made it really hard to continue on with the song. Literally, the last hour of work I put into this was I had to leave out because of how bad it got. Oh well though. Appreciate the review though. I'll make sure the next one I make doesn't just drop out.

[Anal Pewbs]

Aweful.

I seriously don't know how you could've made that and thought 'yeah, ok. I'ma upload!'. It lacks *any* form of variation from its already below-average pattern. It's just ONE pattern which repeats about 20 times, all extremely loud, with a bit of change in the height of the tunes.

I'm not sure weather you think this is good, or you're just a Spam Submitter, since you've only uploaded 3 songs. If you want to create a nice, catchy song, you have to use multiple instruments, use synths, synchronizers, mix it up, use an amp! Maybe it's a little complex to understand, but at least 'keep it real' by adding multiple patterns!

1/10
0/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

Pasty-Flawss responds:

Oh,,, You must know everything about music considering your submission count and all...

[[T] Awesome Guitar Tune]

Nice!

Sounds very nice mate. Loved the build up and the general layout, the sound itself was very clear, and the background melody fits perfectly. Although the guitar solo could use a bit of fine tuning. Bit more variation in the sound.

8/10
4/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

tomashcu responds:

THANKS MAN!!! you are sort of my god now THANKS hope u enjoyed it
yeah i like it when it get to bout 40 secs
-Tomashcu- DJ POWER (OSG)

[sonic colours]

Calming DnB?!

Yesh! I really like the ambient feel you gave to it. Got a great mix of the power of drums, and the calmth of synths and the piano. It has a perfect build-up, with the end really pwning up my speakers. Gotta love the scratching. ;D

Way to go!

10/10
5/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

[Janze - Sun light(trance)]

Huh?

It doesn't sound like the regular trance song at all. :-O Although it's quite nice. It's all a big blur mid-end though. It still sounds ok, but it lost it's 'clear' state.

7/10
3/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

[Center of Nothing]

Darkish DnB ;o

I like it. It's got a great background drum pattern, and the synch/synth fits in really well. (Not sure which one you used) But, as in most cases, it's really repetitive. Test your creativity, let your ideas walk free - experiment! Other than that, good job.

7/10
3/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

[WS - Zatoichi Tribute]

Damn!

This really gives me that 'casual lifestyle' feeling. You took a very nice song to begin with, and the outcome is great. Only downside to this genre is it gets 'boring' real quick, it's a lot of the same.

9/10
4/5

~ La_Yinn, --'

[Dystopia - Cyberpunk Messiah]

Indeed.

The song matches your own comments about it. It sounds pretty dark, and grim - but there's a touch of hope. I think you did a good job on doing that. Gives some life to the track. ;)

8/10
4/5

~La_Yinn, --'

popraz responds:

Thank you !

[The Dawning (A Chant)]

Ambience to the fullest

The thing I love about ambience is that it's so calming, and it fits in so well as almost any background music. This song has a faint touch, which sounds very good, and the chants fit in perfectly. Well done!

9/10
4/5

~ La_Yinn, --'