la-yinn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Hot Hentie]

Hehe.

Gave me a good laugh. ;)

[Munchie Brothers -Olympic]

Impressive.

A nice flash movie. Nice looks, (sort of) had a plot, sound quality was ok, except for the narrator's voice was very irritating though. Maybe capture your own voice next time? ;D

Overall a very decent flash.

[Max The Bee]

O_o

Well, that was certainly random. I like random themes, but this wasn't really a good submission.

Let me start of with saying you have enough knowledge of animation to create a good movie. Why make small, somewhat pointless, loops like these? They're graphically weak, have no plot at all, and the sound was annoying.

Again I ask you, why waste time on these? You could really make something worthwhile, seeing as you know how to make loops, animate correctly, add sound..

Wasteful.

Maxaroni5 responds:

blame anigen

[Madness Humiliation 3]

Doesn't quite do the trick.

To short, not fluent enough, plain background, no objects, no plot.

Do's: Try making it a bit longer, make it more fps, make a decent background, cause just a simpel grey shade isn't really appealing and, add a plot!

Don'ts: Make another one of these without improving. Sorry, no offence intended.

~ La_Yinn, --'

[A.W.E. O.U.T.[Stickfight]]

Touching

It makes me think of certain things that I won't bother you with, hehe ;p

It was a pretty decent stick fight, but sometimes you overdid attacks way to much. At some moments almost the whole screen went black and if that happens often, you kinda stop having an idea of what's going on. :F But it was a nice watch!

[Coprophilia]

O_o

...roflmao.

I'm sorry for my detailed post but that went so fast I can't think of anything constructive to write. :f

Superior-Babboon responds:

a to the l to the cho to the hol

[Flak Cannon]

Wo!

Strange woman O_o Is that someone from Epic Games? :F

Nice fim imo lulz?!

FatBadger responds:

none of the wemens in this film are associated with Epic games.

:(

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 183]

Hmm

After my last review, I never thought I'd look at these series again. Yet I'm here again.. funny how things go don't they? For some strange reason I even had to smile looking at this episode. It's like it's getting better every day, it's weird, but I like it. Yeah. :F Hmm...

*Cough* looking forward to the next one *coughcough*
Psssh!

P.S.: I realise calling people suicidal in my last review wasn't really what I really ment to type, or even ment to express, even. Just pointing that out!

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Okay.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 181]

O w0!

Lookin' mighty fine today boiz!

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

:-O