la-yinn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[PacMan/Mountain Dew]

I don't get it :(

It was not bad qua graphics or sound, or lacked anything specific. But it wasn't anything outstanding, nor do I have ANY clue what the hell it's supposed to be. XD Sorry ;/

[Random Stick Fighting 1]

Quality-less.

Ok....

1.The background sucked, to pixel-ish and it's inconveniant for a background.
2. You're using a to slow framerate.(or just..not enough frames) It takes to long for them to take action, like you're watching paper dolls fight and you have to move them manually.
3. Try some tutorials for help on creating your own weapons etc, cause you draw a few lines which supposed to be a sword or such, and I know you tried, but you can't just make videos existing of merely some black and white lines.

The most important is though, don't make a video in an hour. Don't take this literally and say "I spended weekz on it!!1" cause what I mean is that you should only post a movie, when it's finished.

The sound was pretty good though, nice job on that one! :)

[how not to die driving]

Pretty funny actually

Graphics were pretty poor, and you talked a bit to fast. But I must say it's brave of you to use your own voice in a flash movie. It's been done before, but it's still a bonus in my eyes. Was a nice laugh too! To bad it was on the short side.

ninjitashistory responds:

well,i try always to use my own voice

[Afternoon Lunch]

Why oh why..

you made the bag red in a black&white movie, that made a major diffrence!

~La Yinn

TheSlumberingElderly responds:

Are you being serious, or are you refering to the comment left a while ago. If your refering to the comment, and that comment was sarcastic, he was bitching about it first, and if you were talking about what he said, than sweet. AND, if you were just complaining about the red in the movie, than I appreciate your "constructive" critisism.

[marioXsonic]

an exeption

Normally i don't give such movies a decent rating but i do with this one. why? because although the sounds lacks any quality i could still hear the humorous things mario said to sonic. Good job tbh, and i agree with the reviewer before me, it's good to see you post what YOU think is a good movie.

~La Yinn

behind responds:

I edited the sound to be crappy. And I didn't said what I think is a good movie. Everyone has his own taste. I only said that it is not fair to animators who create their own characters and stories, that spritemovies get that much attention and awards.

[-Rebirth-]

Well done

Was a very good movie, nice drawing skills! :)
Keep it up!

~La Yinn

[Pinja Nigeon]

pretty nice

Although the graphics and the length aren't very good, it's stylish, for some strange reason i really like this movie, keep it up! :)

~La Yinn

[Mario and The Lost Coin]

a good one!

Been a lil' to long since I saw a decent flash as this, the idea is cool, and the takes are very original :)

Graph's: Ok, an 8 nice! I know mario movies can't have a very good graphical style, but try making the fire and ash(when mario shoots him self) a líttle more realistic, oki? ok :D

style:9, great. not really much to add. The reason I don't give a 10 is that I rather give out 10's to REALLY special things. a bit like a 110% thingy

sound: it's ok, but try adding a little more sound, and the game over sounded a little rushed .. to bad =(

violence: a 7, but I won't consider this one in the overall rating, since this mario flash isn't really about violence right?

interactivity: a 7(standard). for movies this is based more on if there are extra's etcetera. To bad you didn't made a "watch again?" button..missed it :(

Humor: same as style, it owns :) but not thát much as some video's before you.

overall: 8, a good flash vid, and creatively done. This one will go into "Ma favvy's!" :P Hope to see more of these.

~Yinneh

[World's Greatest Picnic]

w00t

teh tomato owns j00 =D great movie, its damned funny ^^

[Retarded Animal Babies 13]

To the reviewer before me..

Best review ever:P

But seriously, this flash is one of the best
Where do you get the creativity?!